GOING TO THE DAM
My goal is to use to full stops and capital letters and write descripivly
Some day during the holidays I went to the dam with Phill and Ethan and Kane. We walked down to the the dam we jumped in the water it was freezing i would say it was about 5 degrees we swam over to the shallow side. My brother went down and hit a patch with no slime on it he slipped off the board and skidded the rest of the way on his stomach. Kane went without any trouble then I went I shuffled off the edge I was speeding down it when it started to flatten out. I slid back on the board because I was dragging my feet as a result of that my elbow was sticking off the end and it smacked it on the concrete that hurt like hell. almost straight after that I hit the wave at the bottom witch shoot the board up and hit me in the face witch made my noise bleed hard out. when I was walking to the side I whacked my shin on a slab of concrete at the side . that was one of the funnest days ever but one of the most painful too.
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This is my reading contract term 3
Yellow hat: It was an interesting topic to research this is important because it makes it easier to research a topic that’s interesting.
Black hat the diagrams weren’t very good
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This is my reading work that goes with the book I’m reading inside the game.
Yellow hat: Me and Duncan where the only people to do it we got most of them right.
Black hat: I diden’t have the sentences for all the meanings witch made it hard to get the meanings of the words.
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Yellow hat: I think my writing is good because I had it done before a couple of days before it was dew so i had time to do other work.
Black hat: It was hard to do the middle part of it the E explain was the hardest letter.
This is my boys are better than girls writing
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Yellow hat: Its net and set out well so you know where each question
Black hat: It takes up about three or four pages
This is my reading contract it was one of the hardest reading contract

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This is my formal vs informal writing
Yellow hat: I think I write the two pieces of writing in the person
Black hat: I diden’t really know how to write formal and informally
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I could work on my planning alot because its not very good it needs some more filling
ithas some good describing words in it like bone chilling
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